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Poem Number 1


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 222
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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okay there is poem numba 1 and poem numba two maybe a poem numba three dedicated to a guy who i like. It's just something i feel like lust towards him. So tell me what you think.


Poem Number 1



I see you
light skin
sexy body
i think i want him
i mean you of course
i want to feel
your body against mine
I want you to scream
my name one more time
i want us to...damn
why did i just wake up?




Submitted on 2005-11-12 17:52:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ur naughty. i'm telling ur dad. this was cool too. it was like a dream that u didn't wanna wake up from. a lil erotic, too bad u woke up huh?
| Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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