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    dots Submission Name: Greeting the Dawndots
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    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 738
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this because I just wanted to. I seem to think in song. I write poems, but wen I write them out loud, as I do, they come out as music. Any poetry slammers out there I'd appreciate tips.


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    dotsGreeting the Dawndots
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    If I should die before I wake,
    and never again meet the day,
    You know what? That just might be okay.

    Because you don't need me anymore, no more than I need me.
    And in my house I'm just the wallpaper,
    Nothing there to see.

    If I should die before I wake,
    and never get to greet the dawn again.
    For you, would it be the end?
    Or just some loose ends knotted up.

    Do I really mean that much to so few?
    Do I seem like so little to so many?
    Do I look like I need to be used;
    taken for granted?
    Do I have a sign on my back that says
    empty space, use as wanted?

    And if I should die before I wake,
    could you please take off the tape that holds the sign? Could you rip me off the walls, show people that I'm more than a flat surface?
    Could you please wash me off so I don't look like I did? So I don't need to be used, abused, and taken for granted.

    If I should die before I wake,
    that's all that it would take,
    to make it okay for me.




    Submitted on 2005-11-12 19:34:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You have a very mature view and way of expressing yourself for a teenager - but you still keep it simple and with depth and meaning.
    This was a well-done piece!
    Don't get discouraged - I sometimes don't get a lot of comments either but when you write for yourself and for your expression and growth - that's what matters!
    Great day!
    Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE!~!
    tif
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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