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    dots Submission Name: The eleventh of Novemberdots
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    Author: samyalone
    ASL Info:    17/f/my room
    Elite Ratio:    3.85 - 93/67/18
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       this is a poem i made for rememberence day. Remember those solders who lost their lives in the war to give you freedom

    "Lest we forget"


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    dotsThe eleventh of Novemberdots
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    Remember the bloodshed,
    The pain and the tears.
    Remember the death,
    Over those short years.

    Respect, those people,
    Who were so brave.
    To give us freedom,
    Their lives they gave.

    Now they sit in the poppies
    The crosses mark their place.
    In the skies above,
    their fates they embrace.

    So on this day,
    he eleventh of November,
    We shall never forget,
    Because we remember.




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