I agree w/orpheus; this IS weird. Dunno what you're trying to portray here, but I do like this haiku. I think the juxtaposition of the cold with the blood (an image of warmth) is a nice contrast.
i like it...the use of cold and blood intrigues me...haiku, interesting...why did you choose that for this poem? i mean you could have doen a lot with it, and you still could...original, i like it.
hmmm, wierd and cold like the weather outside, makes the hairs on my neck stand on end, the white and red contrast and the contradictions or metaphore's outstanding and a bit disturbing
Submission Name: Porcelain Epitaph {Haiku}
