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    dots Submission Name: Story of Blooddots
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    Author: girl_w__scars
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 1/5/5
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       I wrote this when i started cutting again(I wrote it in english).This was not just to vent it was a poem that means something. My teacher said to write something real to us and i wrote about this, maybe it was a little to serious but it really means something to me.


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    dotsStory of Blooddots
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    Let me write you a story
    A story with a twist
    Watch my pen, turn into a razor
    And my paper, into my wrist
    Watch the ink, turn into blood
    And start flooding off the page, onto to the desk
    Let me continue my wicked ways
    Even though you see me
    From our school hallway




    Submitted on 2005-11-14 19:20:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem, it reminds me of a song for some reason, which I like. You compare ordinary objects to those of pain. Its very creative. But anyway, good job.
    -Caroline
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    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by mysweetsuicide | [ Reply to This ]
      love this, its wonderful. your meaning is a sad one but at least it has rings of truth to
    it. reality is the best form of poetry.
    i like the beginning, how you say

    /let me write you a story/

    puts the feel of desolation and gives the reader a sense of your pain.
    | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by _1JayeFanEver | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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