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Raining crimson tears, Among those who cannot and do not care Zoneing in and out, feeling the pain that will never go away. Ongoing agonizing gentle skim Remaing for a slight second, the cool touch Blame me for the touch, for I blame you Leave me to it's gentle caress Air so hard to breathe Degradation, the scars of its sweet and tender touch cause. Exacting revege, the hand slightly pinches. Kisses and gentle nudges, Impossibly quickly change. Seeing the tears it brings to me Screaming out as it's gentle touch becomes cold and heartless. Expecting the impending sorrow it brings. Sigh, slightly as you see the burgundy rivers they create on contact. |
This is so... me. Wow. Holy hell... I don't even know what to say. This is going on my fav lists. Please, comment on mine. A writer like you makes a great critic. Always, Dark Ainjul | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by Ashleigh Mari | [ Reply to This ] | An excellent write | You were able to bring us your readers into the reasons you feel the way you do Trust me thinking Positive Thoughts will help carry you thru lifes turmoil It has certainly helped me Keep in touch Ron | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | Sam its good | and i know what your saying i think i know who you are talking about but i don't get this part "Ongoing agonizing gentle skim" well yea bye | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by inuyasha_s girl | [ Reply to This ] | D: This was pretty-- | sad. I guess. it is saying to me. I'm in so much pain that your love couldn't possibly pull me out, and even the slightest foul movement could result in diasaster. Yea. | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ] | wow. I can relate big time..it was beautiful. i cope the same way and i feel your pain. i love the way you write...fav | Reeses | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by Numb | [ Reply to This ] | |