Raining crimson tears,
Among those who cannot and do not care
Zoneing in and out, feeling the pain that will never go away.
Ongoing agonizing gentle skim
Remaing for a slight second, the cool touch
Blame me for the touch, for I blame you
Leave me to it's gentle caress
Air so hard to breathe
Degradation, the scars of its sweet and tender touch cause.
Exacting revege, the hand slightly pinches.
Kisses and gentle nudges,
Impossibly quickly change.
Seeing the tears it brings to me
Screaming out as it's gentle touch becomes cold and heartless.
Expecting the impending sorrow it brings.
Sigh, slightly as you see the burgundy rivers they create on contact.
This is so... me. Wow. Holy hell... I don't even know what to say. This is going on my fav lists. Please, comment on mine. A writer like you makes a great critic.
An excellent write You were able to bring us your readers into the reasons you feel the way you do Trust me thinking Positive Thoughts will help carry you thru lifes turmoil It has certainly helped me Keep in touch Ron
D: This was pretty-- sad. I guess. it is saying to me. I'm in so much pain that your love couldn't possibly pull me out, and even the slightest foul movement could result in diasaster.
Submission Name: Razorblade Kisses
