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I wish

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
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Just a spare of the moment one-

Idk if its ok- so tell us how u think it is-

thanx guys

luv yas all :)

Luv Me


I wish

I wish-
that all the souls that unjustly died,
Could be alive again and be rightly tried-

I wish-
That out of all the people you see,
You could shake their hand and know that they’ll be friendly-

I wish-
That all the wars in the world and out on the streets,
Could go away and vanish and leave people in peace-

I wish-
No one ever feel the hurt,
And no one ever be pushed in the dirt-

I wish-
That peoples souls could fly,
And let them see the world through a different eye-

I wish-
That people could just gather it together,
And unite their hands and pray forever-

I wish-
That no one ever have to go through this,
And nothing bad that ever happens goes amiss-

Submitted on 2005-11-14 22:49:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  that's a great piece of work you did there, completely touching and very sincere and wonderful wishes keep you thoughts and wishes coming am sure we'd like to read more :)
| Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]
  These are some really good wishes you've made here, I too wish for these to come true(especially the 1st one)! Welcome to EliteSkills, keep on writing!

| Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]

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