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    dots Submission Name: River of blooddots
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    Author: Fadeintoreality
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 33/115/65
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       I just want honest feedback on what you think this means


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    dotsRiver of blooddots
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    The lies we tell
    are only the truth in which we hide
    Secrets are our adrenaline
    we feed off not knowing
    its ok
    stop screaming
    the voices in you're head
    have every right to be there
    but god forbid
    you don't have to stay here
    time stops
    every seconed of the day
    you can see it in the very breath you take
    can you change it
    do you have the power?
    hate and devour the young
    even the weaker ones
    hate all the people you love
    in a river of blood
    but you need them
    need them to destroy
    everything you know
    when you don't get what you want
    its all a game
    you're choice to lose.




    Submitted on 2005-11-15 13:10:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Man this is another cool thing I've read from you. (This is the 2nd.)

    I'm not really sure but... The 'river' of blood is like um... suicide? Or you try to hate the people around you, and kill and toss them so you can make a river? LOL.

    I believe there's some deep feeling inside, and this expresses only a part of it.

    Sorry if I'm not making much sense.
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]


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