Description: I just want honest feedback on what you think this means
River of blood -------------------------------------------
The lies we tell
are only the truth in which we hide
Secrets are our adrenaline
we feed off not knowing
its ok
stop screaming
the voices in you're head
have every right to be there
but god forbid
you don't have to stay here
time stops
every seconed of the day
you can see it in the very breath you take
can you change it
do you have the power?
hate and devour the young
even the weaker ones
hate all the people you love
in a river of blood
but you need them
need them to destroy
everything you know
when you don't get what you want
its all a game
you're choice to lose.
Man this is another cool thing I've read from you. (This is the 2nd.)
I'm not really sure but... The 'river' of blood is like um... suicide? Or you try to hate the people around you, and kill and toss them so you can make a river? LOL.
I believe there's some deep feeling inside, and this expresses only a part of it.
Submission Name: River of blood
