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Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 138
Class/Type: Poetry /Death
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Description:


-Meah-


Gone...



I glance over the edge-
It’s a long way down,
The little voice in my heart,
Screams for me to jump-
But,
The little voice in my head,
Tell me to,
Turn around,
Go back down the stairs,
And go to bed-
What to do?
Its like-
Left or right?
Up or down?
Devil or angel?
Liar or truth teller?
But-
The only difference is-
The right side,
The truth side,
The angel side-
Is hidden away from me
A trick,
Played by the devil
So he can
Deceit me-
Is my heart the angel?
Calling for me,
To come to her-
Or is my head the angel?
Telling me she needs me,
To stay,
Here,
On earth-
Well…
Things don’t always end,
With happy endings…
So…
I am faithful,
To my heart-
And…
I am home




Submitted on 2005-11-15 15:22:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow i like that alot, its very mystifing, in its own way, theres not much more to say about it it was excellet great job, keep up to good work.
| Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Solemn Star 88 | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this is is very good but its a but i guess thats the style...good i liked it much! loved the angel devil part! Peace! KeLLy
| Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by bleedinbabygrl8 | [ Reply to This ]


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