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    dots Submission Name: Hated By Many... Loved By Fewdots
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    Author: K-Beezy
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Columbia, S.C.
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 46/81/27
    Words: 470
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
    Total Views: 1212
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2359



    Description:
       This was a poem I did questioning people's friendship towards me. Sometimes, I get that sketchy vibe at me, and it's like, 'Okay dawg, what da fuck be yo problem?" So this poem wants to know why so many people may hate me, and why so many people don't love me.


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    dotsHated By Many... Loved By Fewdots
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    Hated by many... liked by some... loved by few. This is Me; the me you never took time to know. This is me. . . the one you always shoved around in high school because he didn't take your shit like all the others did. I'm hated by many, because the insults and discouragement that was placed on me, uplifted me to higher grounds. Hated by many, because the root of the anger towards me, was the seed that planted a victorious warrior in me. Hated by many because you thought I would never become anything, but yet, you're nothing and I'm making something outta' somethin you thought was nothing... So ain't that something?

    I'm liked by some because I carry a mean streak, but still carry the urge to still speak. Liked by some, because I have the audacity to opinionate my views of the world through my eyes... whether it's wrong or right, real or unrealistc, my view will be thrown and smashed into your face. Respected by some, because I know how to say what I feel, feel what I say to say what I feel and feel what I say. You feel me? Liked by some, because though the bitch ass attitude of me stands out, you view my outside as a part of the world... one with the world. The same... one on one. Breathing. . . sweating... crying. Liked by some because I am the epitome of a real man - strong, bold in character, subtle in violence, but powerful in words.


    Loved by few because I show them the best that I have to offer. Loved by few because deep inside the pits of my soul, they viewed the heart of a sincere and humble man. I carry the compassion to give... the lust for greatness and the encouragement of a conqueror. Loved by few, because beneath the Timberland boots and black tee's... you saw me for me... loved me for me... cherish me for me... Loved by few because, beneath the my bitch ass... beneath the harsh words. . . you see the soul of a humble man. The Diary of A Eloquist. . . The tapestry of A Revolutonized Man. You love me for me, because when I didn't love myself enough, you stepped in and took the part of nuturing my lost soul, and rejuvenating me back to par.


    Now why am I not loved by more? Hated by less, and liked by the ones who hate me? You be the judge. Which one are you to me?




    Submitted on 2005-11-15 16:11:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      man, have u ever heard of a poetry slam... you should go to one...its where you basicly resite ur [censored] and see what people think...you write very [censored]in well...do u rap? or just write poetry?
    | Posted on 2005-12-14 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      Whaddup KB...man, u know I had to stop through and show you some love. We ghetto poets gotta support lol, but nah, on the real... u know that the stuff you say always hits me. Our styles are different but the message is always conveyed. Whether were on the phone or whatever the case my be...an understanding always concludes the conversation. And me, knowin you personally...I feel where your coming from and the people on here, just by reading this...also feel where your comin from. In more ways than one...u catch the attention of many and that can't go unnoticed. Keep it up pimpin...Beezy Bone lol...Big ass Crest Whitening smile lmao
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by PrettyRicki | [ Reply to This ]
      okay at first glance I thought...wow this is going to be hard on the eyes...and it's a bit of a long write...first paragraph had me thinking okay so the pace is a bit fast but he does have some truths to the words...second paragraph had me thinking okay there is a gem here...but your last paragraph just blew me away...it was pure and utter eloquent floetry!

    "Loved by few, because beneath the Timberland boots and black tee's... you saw me for me... loved me for me... cherish me for me... Loved by few because, beneath the my [censored] ass... beneath the harsh words. . . you see the soul of a humble man. The Diary of A Eloquist. . . The tapestry of A Revolutonized Man."

    that is just beauty that I haven't seen from a man in a long long time...in fact the last time I saw it was almost six years back and the man who wrote such lyrical beauties said he was gon make it big...i thought it was online talk...he's now world known...I think you too can be like him...that may be a lot to say off one read but you seriously have me that much in awe...I look forward to reading more of your creations...and to harrassing you (you've already met my sista Li Li or Munchie_1226)

    Tina Elite's ghetto ballerina...
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I can understand that. It is a very moving piece. It almost comanded others to understand. i liked how it did that. I get the feeling others hate me. Just for who i am. Don't let them change you. Stay the same and never faultar. I changed myself to be loved by others. And i pass each day with a fake smile and lying eyes. It took me almost killing myself to understand that the important thing is just for me to be myself and i wish to tell you the same. Very well written. great work,
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by Akai_Ame | [ Reply to This ]
      that was great. it really proved the point and i liked that! it was like saying "understand how i feel" because other stuff is more of just rhymes and oxymorons and whatnot but this got to the point and was saying exactly what you wanted to say.
    -BleedingTears
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
      I am not a hater...nuh uh! Not me! This was a tight little rant/vent/prose thing going on here. You definitely opened my heart out...I see so much of this in myself. many hate me...but others love me for being the exact same person that the others hate me for.

    Either way...be who you are...do what you do...if you are satisfied with yourself at the end of the day...that's all that matters.

    Much love!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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