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    dots Submission Name: The Stalest Of Scoresdots
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    Author: weepingprophet
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 26/44/31
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Stalest Of Scoresdots
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    sit up.
    shake myself awake
    slap.
    sting across my face
    i've erased you

    somewhere you are whole
    in the world
    you are simple
    and satisfied

    three months and six days
    i'm fading away
    waste.

    the nightmare began
    a huddled mass
    an outstretched arm
    a single slash

    from this wrist is born
    my remorse
    the solace that settles
    even the steepest of scores

    i'm dripping slow
    the shallow ear
    yearning to know
    i bear only what i suffer
    to hold near

    that somewhere in the world
    you are whole, satisfied
    and three months six days
    i've been denied

    from this wrist is born
    my remorse
    the solace that settles
    even the stalest of scores




    Submitted on 2005-11-16 03:27:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I hope you dont mind me attempting to make things write-
    This poem was well written and touched me on a personal level rminding me of myself,
    reminding me of how horrible it feels to love someone and not be able to show it,
    Thank you for writing this peice it helped meto think.
    I know now that i am not completly alone.
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Atrip187 | [ Reply to This ]



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