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    dots Submission Name: Herodots
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    Author: OrenroccA
    ASL Info:    17/M/Virgina
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 29/38/18
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    dotsHerodots
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    It was a dusty night as the fire blazed like

    a bright light. it was warm in that room

    the smell of my very own burning flesh was

    making me sick. i could hear the

    firefighters trying thier hardest to save me

    but i knew this was the end.

    that was it everything went black and then i

    saw the light. i saw God standing in front

    of me with his arms wide open. i sit from

    heaven today looking down on my beloved

    country crying that i want be able to ever

    see my famliy again wishing, hoping that i

    could go back. but i cant i have to stay up

    here. i'll make everyone 1 promise i will

    comfort and help you all throughout your
    life.....good luck.






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