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I Love you.


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 47
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Description:


Its alllright coulds done BETTER!!!!


Love brings out the best and the worst outa people- idk what this did to me- but i was thinkin of my boy :)


Peace Out

Me :) xx


I Love you.



I-
A letter,
Yet a word,
Means to me
Myself-

Love-
One word,
Means so much,
The spirit of my soul is set free,
Lifts my heart as if it had wings-

You-
The word,
Means nothing to me-
But the person...
Means everything




Submitted on 2005-11-16 16:30:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  it was a good poem. i love the way you describe what the words mean to you. most people say those three words without recognition of what they really mean and yet you have specified what it means to you. i like that!

xx
Chanyn
| Posted on 2006-10-16 00:00:00 | by Shark06 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmm a short poem but you have a good rhyme there You- are a great talented poem maker, thats uniqe i havent seen a poem like this, this is somehow original, i like this kind of poem, keep it up m8
-garnet4david-
| Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by garnet4david | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked this poem alot.it had great meaning.
i used to do that with ppl'z names-
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a-art
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im sry.Anywho-since i liked that so much,its saved as a fav.

-_dancing-alone_
| Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by _Dancing_Alone_ | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it. I don't think you need to add anything to it. It's nicely written and as said, uniquely done.
I especially like those last two lines,"The word
Means nothing to me, But the person, Means everything."
Great job on that. I loved those lines.
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Lies | [ Reply to This ]
  This is nice and unique, i've never seen a poem done like this. Very original, i like this. Just add more depth to each section next time.


~Kane~
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ]


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