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A book

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 107
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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this is basicly a poem that describes my poetry book...diverse. lol because i write so many different poems with so many different...i don't each one has a different feeling to it. I don't just stick to one voice in my poetry. I change and change and change. With my changes my poetry changes and changes and changes. So tell me what you think.

A book

A book of poems
a book of songs
a book by me
made too damn long
a book of raps
and poems with a hip hop vibe
a book that tells you
yea she tried
A book of sorrow
a book of regret
a book of something
that you didn't get
a book of love
a book of hate
a book that made me wonder
why the hell did we date?
a book of spirt
a book of soul
a book of secrets
that maybe arn't told
a book about us
when you and me were "we"
a book of poems
all written by me

Submitted on 2005-11-16 17:24:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  WOW...this is amazing, because it's very original, I would never think to write a poem about my poems, that's [censored]in slick, I'm adding this one to my favorites...and:

"a book about us
when you and me were "we"
a book of poems
all written by me" a very strong ending, I love the work, keep em comin

thank you

| Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by vanhokinshtyl | [ Reply to This ]
  this is cool. this is like a look into u and ur art. i never thought about writing about my book. very creative. this is gonna be a fave. keep it up. oh by the many poems do u post a day?
| Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  o cool,this is a very nice poem that lets "the viewers @ home" into ur thoughts about wat u think about ur book of emotions.i liked how u put some comedy in it-
"a book that made me wonder
why the hell did we date?"-funny.anywho,good work keep it up!
- _dancing_alone_
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by _Dancing_Alone_ | [ Reply to This ]

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