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    dots Submission Name: HOMEdots
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    Author: bluecrane
    ASL Info:    19/F/WASHINGTON
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 70/83/26
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsHOMEdots
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    i'm home again, somewhere else
    and the dreams are becoming brighter
    i'm alone again, with nobody else
    but in a way that's all i need

    i'm home again, where no one can hurt me
    i'm alone, and i'm finally happy
    in my head where i can be me
    and never be jugded again

    it's safe here, inside myself
    and i know that it's alright
    i'm alone again, and nothing else matters
    it's nothing but heaven when it's just me




    Submitted on 2005-11-17 00:11:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a lot like how I feel when I'm happy and I'm just by myself, it's nice, knowing that it's just you and nothing else. No one's saying anything, and you can do whatever you want without anyone else trying to stop you. Nice words, and good flow. This is well written and I think it's really good.

    Cheers,
    Azael
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      in one of my poem's i wrote that home is within myself and therfore i am not homeless even though i may not have a roof excet for the stars and we know those are god's roof and that is pretty
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by papalegba | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this
    We all need time to meditate to realize just how gifted we truly are
    I always take time out from the day to just close my eyes and relax in the beautiful silence
    It really does help to heal a wandering mind
    Great Write
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I FEEL THE SAME WAY SOMETIMES. I CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM. I THOUGHT AT FIRST THAT "HOME" WOULD BE A PLACE FOR YOU RATHER THAN YOURSELF. NOW THAT OLD SAYING "HOME IS WHERE THE HEART IS" MAKES MORE SENSE. AND IF YOU HAVE ENOUGH LOVE FOR YOURSELF, THAN IT CAN BE THE SAFEST PLACE FOR YOU... MY SAFEST PLACE IS IN THE COMPANY OF GOOD FRIENDS. I ENJOYED THIS POEM A LOT; ITS UNIQUE, AND IT MANAGED TO HELP ME REALIZE THAT "HOME", OR SELF-LOVE IS THE BEST KIND OF LOVE.
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      Its a poem eveybody can identify with. I liked the lines :
    t's safe here, inside myself
    and i know that it's alright

    I need to remind myself from time to time that I am always inside of myself, a safe place.

    Good write , keep up the good work.

    ARK
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by ARK | [ Reply to This ]


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