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    dots Submission Name: Full Moon Silhouettedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 738
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    Bytes: 281



    Description:
       Most Magnificent Moon last night....I was reading and it reminded me that our senses aren't always as we've identified them....you can hear something without ears just as blinded you can still see ~ within.

    Think, Experience, Be
    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    tif


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    dotsFull Moon Silhouettedots
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    Full Moon Silhouette
    Sweet Serenade
    Me tHE Dream
    I Truly AM

    Oh yes, audible
    Light
    I hear your
    magnetic
    pull
    in
    heart
    &
    your beam
    is the beacon
    of
    my
    SOUL




    Submitted on 2005-11-17 14:46:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Geez Tiff, You make me feel better, I thought I was one of few who could hear light, but you pull it off beautifully here. The cicadas in "mystery still" are real and when silence surrounds me, (even when it's quiet, shhh, such a secret!) I begin to listen from the inside out to reconnect. Stop loving and we fall down a shaft of our own design..

    Yes the moon is beautiful and this is great poetry, thanks for sharing your moment in time.

    peace and love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2005-11-19 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      This is lovely. Your minimalistic quality is excellent here. You speak volumes in so few words and I think you have penned a great one here! I love the moon, the stars, the night sky. I am a stargazer at heart, always have been. Autumn is the best season to view the sky, the cool dry air really brings out the beauty. Anyway, a couple different meanings in this one. Many times we can see and hear things much clearer and concisely without the actual sense! Very good write. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      I know that you have an affinity to the moon - as I have. I know what you are saying here. Very descriptive and very good.
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      thanx for your comment on poems i no its short and simple another nice natural poem for you
    it seems us older writers on this site have some great stories to tell wether fiction or true to life i am starting to enjoy writing and reading good poetry
    great write and thanx
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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