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    dots Submission Name: connie brooksdots
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    Author: papalegba
    ASL Info:    45/male/schenectady ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 52/42/28
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsconnie brooksdots
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    there was a woman
    with matted hair
    rasta not
    she would be of a fragrence all her own
    they would spray were ever she went
    she may of had some mental disorder but
    was still a creation of god
    her bedroom was any doorway
    the cop's would time to time
    bring her to the hospital
    for a bath and hair cut
    her parents would give her a bus pass each month
    would leave money at friendly's or
    somewhere else so she may eat
    because of her age no one would force her
    to be medicated and she was no danger
    she would sit al day in the libary
    if no one complained
    they would look out for her
    then one year
    colder that other's
    they found poor connie
    in the fetal position
    frozen they had to snap her back
    so she could be taken away
    why does god let people go this way
    i have no clue
    unless people like this are infact
    god and he/she is waitting for us to respond
    for you never know how he will appear to us
    it's been years know since connie has past
    twenty or more
    why has she come back to my mind
    at this time
    is it a warning
    i think we must all pray
    and just think who is infront of us
    pray for all the homeless




    Submitted on 2005-11-17 15:20:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ron you know that the polly's in washington do not care about their own as for the military experaments in the past and other ways like giving small pox to all the natives this country was founded on inhumanity to it's own as we see the power's that be condem other countries for doing the same thing we do at home that is why some people say the end is near for how could god be happy with all this meess thanks agin
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by papalegba | [ Reply to This ]
      My friend
    I couldnt agree with you more
    People like us Have a heart and we try to do everything we can to reach out
    But one thing has always troubled me
    Why do we send our own food and our own funds first to other countries when we have our own people dying in front of us despertly in need of shelter and food
    You can try as others have to explain this to me but it never makes sense
    Thank you for opening up some eyes to this
    And know my Friend
    I pray every night for the homeless
    They need all the prayers they can get
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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