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    dots Submission Name: Cyclicaldots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    Bytes: 300



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    dotsCyclicaldots
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    I am raging river
    forcing rocks
    to shape
    A wave alone yet
    over time
    a swell
    I do not weep to
    join ocean's
    rising tide
    I am the rain
    drenching growth
    in Love
    Only to be river
    again in
    my purpose.




    Submitted on 2004-04-23 10:24:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you like making people think don't you? you know some states would consider that unconstitutional, deeming it cruel and unusual punishment. i'm not sure if the opening sentence is as you wrote it to be or if there's a typo, but either way it posses the same meaning just a more formative read, well close anyways.
    | Posted on 2006-03-29 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really sweet, it reminds me of a conversation I had with my boyfriend the other night, we were talking about our love for eachother, and how he is the river that kisses my feet when I wade in the water, and I am the pearl that inhabits the shells living in his ocean, he is so sweet, I like this cuz it reminds me of it, nice work!
    | Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
      This is some fantastic imagery, and I like the lines 'I do not weep to join ocean's rising tide' that was really nice. Good write.
    | Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
      it gives power to one with,
    deeper thought
    a need to boost confidence
    a mission
    or the sometimes feeling of being alone.

    may i copy for fold up into my secret hip pocket?
    | Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by paulie d | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this one...not quite sure the name suits, but maybe that's just because I'm personally used to "cyclical" as being a reference to my depressive mood swings...*l*

    Nice, simple piece
    | Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]


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