5-minute poem #1
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5-minute poem #1
In giving thanks We bow are head Thankful for all the food that’s spread Out on the table for us to share Everyone has their rightful chair This is the first real meal That has been good in our time to heal So many are not with us And their beds lay covered in dust But it is for the children that We continue leaving our past at the door mat For this is Thanksgiving and they need Happiness so that they can proceed Into a better tomorrow And not remain in sorrow |
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| Wow girl, i liked it!, it reminds me that even the world is going to hell, we can leave our troubles at the door and still enjoy a wonderful thanksgiving dinner. with turkey and great food and family. i luv ya grl | Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by Tabbie Kat | [ Reply to This ] | you wrote this in 5 minutes? is that what the title means? if so, very nice. I think the rhythm is off a bit but the message is so good... | Milo | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by Milo shanley | [ Reply to This ] | This is a really nice and festive poem. It tells me to enjoy what I have now, still remembering the people that I have known and are gone. | I really love this poem and commend you for it. Amber | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by PoeticSoul666 | [ Reply to This ] | A good job | The theme of the poem is very much needed in todays society Im glad that this time of the year has come again it is my favorite holiday We all really need to give thanks for the very gift of life Take Care Ron | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | |
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