This could have been read at a memorial service in honor of any father who loved his family. No need for accolades, based on what you've written, you must have been his crowning achievement; someone thoughtful enough to reflect on the importance of family and share it with generations to follow. No doubt he's proud of you. Very personal, very simple write. Nicely done.
Oh im really sorry I bet it must be hard for you. Your piece was very emotional and had me feeling so sad and at the same time fill of love. this is the kind of love that i like, the one where there is kindness. I feel your pain although my feelings toward your poem can never reach that level of pain that you went through the fact that you lost a love one is just to much to bear. Your poem has a nice flow to it and your words so true, the size of his heart was the greatest quality that he had Im sure. Wonderful piece you just made a stalker out of me.
Another lovely poem about your father. Very heartfelt and touching. It is obvious that you love your dad deeply and sounds like you were blessed with being able to spend some very memorable times with him. So sad he died so young, it never seems to make any sense and is something you can never prepare yourself for. This is a very personal, emotional poem and you have expressed your love very well. Lovely. Take care.