"'You are slower than a cake of molasses."' OLoved that line. My favourite out of your whole poem, which is probably a very good thing becuse it is the hook that keeps the reader, and the fish..lol..good job and keep writing. ~Caotic~
HaHa! What a unique write. Maybe I should remember this one when my husband is ignoring me. This was outstanding; I believe many people can relate to it. The title fit the poem very well. Thanks for making me laugh today and sharing this piece. Good Day to ya!
i love the sarcasim yet seriousness of this write at the same time...hilarious really...i got a picture in my head of someone holding a sign up trying to get a response from this other person...but i get what you mean my ex was like that it used to drive me insane...purps
Haha! I like this one. This gave me a smile as I read it. I said "Gee I have felt like this before!" Now I can see why you chose the title you did here haha! This is a most frustrating feeling indeed and waiting on someone really sucks. I like the analogy of 'slower than a cake of molasses' that describes the waiting game really well. Makes ya wanna say..."YOOO HOOO, I'm still here" haha! This is a very good vent. Short and sweet and right to the point. I would suggest a question mark at the end of your last line to emphasize the question. Otherwise, I like this one. Thanks for the smile, you probably didnt intend to make anyone smile with this but you did!Take care.
It sounds like my wife on one of her 'off days' or are they MY off days? hehehe A question mark on the last line would help give that end clarification maybe, I had to look again as it through me off with its abruptness, but I am fairly simple so don't worry about it.
Good stuff it really does make think of the mrs :chuckles: V
Wow, a short poem, but it expresses loads of emotions! I love it! I know how you feel, I really do. I know that some people hate it when others say that to them, but sorry if I offended you, lol. I'm always getting ignored around my house. It's like I don't exist. Great write.