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sugar in my bowl


Author: mimi
ASL Info:    30/f/ny
Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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nina simone is the greatest


sugar in my bowl



for me, only brown sugar will do.
when u bring the sugar,
put some into my bowl
stir it with your stick
make it melt,
hot and wet.
I met a brown sugar.
as he strolled his way through town
and I filled my bowl with coffee
so he would come and drown
i told him that he moved me
it was hot and it was steamy
as I melted the sugar in my bowl.





Submitted on 2005-11-18 17:51:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  sounds nasty to me here lol ok he has the stick that sturs the suga? lol
ok let me go before my mind keeps thinking tempations lol peace
| Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this
It is very well written in a short amount of words
Excellent write!

By the way the reason I use capitols so much in my writes is because i believe it makes the point better
for instance if I write
brian bleeds blur tears
Or
Brian Bleeds Blue Tears
The capitols add more emotion to a write
Take Care
Ron
I will be looking for more of your writes
Take Care
Your Friend
Ron
| Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  i thought this was gonna be something...a lil less erotic. the title reminded me of when i used to put sugar in my bowl of frosted flakes when i was little. treybur is right. this is a dirty way to start ur day. hey that rhymed!
| Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  lol, a dirty way to start the day. i haven't had coffee yet, and now i'm not really sure i want to. but it's well written and enjoyable :) good job on this one :)
| Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]
  that's a delightful piece of work , very pleasant and intriguing and i really enjoyed reading and going through it , keep up the good work and your thoughts flowing :)
| Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]


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