sugar in my bowl
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sugar in my bowl
for me, only brown sugar will do. when u bring the sugar, put some into my bowl stir it with your stick make it melt, hot and wet. I met a brown sugar. as he strolled his way through town and I filled my bowl with coffee so he would come and drown i told him that he moved me it was hot and it was steamy as I melted the sugar in my bowl. |
Submitted on 2005-11-18 17:51:26 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| sounds nasty to me here lol ok he has the stick that sturs the suga? lol ok let me go before my mind keeps thinking tempations lol peace | Posted on 2005-12-09 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ] | I like this | It is very well written in a short amount of words Excellent write! By the way the reason I use capitols so much in my writes is because i believe it makes the point better for instance if I write brian bleeds blur tears Or Brian Bleeds Blue Tears The capitols add more emotion to a write Take Care Ron I will be looking for more of your writes Take Care Your Friend Ron | Posted on 2005-12-03 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | i thought this was gonna be something...a lil less erotic. the title reminded me of when i used to put sugar in my bowl of frosted flakes when i was little. treybur is right. this is a dirty way to start ur day. hey that rhymed! | | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | lol, a dirty way to start the day. i haven't had coffee yet, and now i'm not really sure i want to. but it's well written and enjoyable :) good job on this one :) | | Posted on 2005-12-01 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ] | that's a delightful piece of work , very pleasant and intriguing and i really enjoyed reading and going through it , keep up the good work and your thoughts flowing :) | | Posted on 2005-11-18 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ] | |
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