Description: I have no idea why i wrote this poem . I have no experience in the matter and i wrote more from the guys point of view even though i'm a girl. So it's pretty messed up but take a look for yourself
Blood Red Rose -------------------------------------------
Nothing shows more passion
tells of love with such compassion
nothing dares to even
try to compare
to the feeling that comes
for to which all other must succumb
to the power of the blood red rose
Through which no dread flows
a flood of wind has rose
a moment of complete repose
Her face begins to glow
as if she already knows
You take out the ring
and let it gleam
And you take out
the blood red rose
The time has arose
you choose now to propose
just as the sun rose
the moment seems to have froze
The wind blows through her hair
her skin is pale and fair
The moment
you will always share
her gaze shows no despair
and you become a pair
To fate you your future lies
filled wth much suprise
though problems may arise
as you look into each others eyes
your love will just apprise
until death arrives
this is good but there is one line that doesn't fit your ryhme scheme: *so that nothing dares to compare* that ryhme is with in the line itself which is the only time but that's not a huge problem. This was really sweet...great write...there's really not much I can think of...very simplistic yet everyone understands the symoblism of a red rose so it's not a problem. good write. keep writing. Peace
Submission Name: Blood Red Rose
