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    dots Submission Name: Microsoft Word to your heartdots

    Author: ariadne
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 99/85/26
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMicrosoft Word to your heartdots

    I type and I type,
    from Microsoft Word to your heart,
    my thoughts are ripe.
    I feel them grow,
    like the rise of waves and smell of reef-,
    as I wait for you to show.
    How do I say in key’s strike,
    what the tracing of my fingers
    on your tattoos feels like?
    How do I sing in this font,
    to cry how your music
    is all I ever want?

    It moves my feet,
    like a dancer sneaking in my groove,
    I keep it discreet.
    Like something new,
    it freshens my breath, soul and clarity
    towards you.
    Nights come at five,
    darkening my eyes til you’re just how I like you
    and your music, alive.
    And I know I must
    leave with the smile you first fell for,
    I leave with you:
    my love
    my trust.

    Submitted on 2005-11-20 19:30:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      whoa. this is really neat. i think you could produce more with this(you dont need to because its already good) because with word there are so many features.. this is a really interesting piece.
    | Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by namesdontmatter | [ Reply to This ]
      Nicely written
    I like the words and the form you used to express your love to your soulmate
    A very Good write!
    Take Care

    Please if you get a chance please take a look at some of my poetry and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    | Posted on 2005-11-21 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this.. it makes me think of when i
    chat with my girl on the computer (we are 2000 miles apart right now).. it's hard to put it into words how
    you feel about this person, but you've done a superb job. it's very
    beautifully written.

    | Posted on 2005-11-20 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Very sweet.
    It is a nice twist on the frustrations of expressing love.

    Still you manage to make your true feelings known.

    How do I sing in this font,
    to cry how your music
    is all I ever want?

    It moves my feet,
    like a dancer sneaking in my groove

    Clever and well said.

    Good job.
    | Posted on 2005-11-20 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]

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