Description: Whatever you want to write just write something
thanke you
I Thought I Knew You -------------------------------------------
Who the hell are you?
To tell me I aint nothing
I was something when my paints became unbutton
I was the love of your life
The girl who wanted to become your wife
I was the apple in your eye
And when I raised my thighs I was your number one prize
When I kissed your face
You said you loved me more then the rest
When things got hotter then the midnight air
I was the girl you always wanted
When I started to slow down just to tease you
You screamed out
Like I was your number one fan
Then we stopped
You rolled over
I did the same
Morning came and I was the blame
You looked at me
Like I was the enemy
But just last night I thought you befriended me
What you said was all lies
But how you said it made me think it was really true
I guess that’s what I get when I sleep
With someone I barely knew
i like the message but there are a few mistakes, the second to last line says "i guess thats what i get when i slept" should be sleep not slept, try proof reading your work better.
there were quite a few typos,"Who the hell are? "I Think You Left A Word Out but thats about the only thing wrong.over all it was pretty good. Keep Writing
Submission Name: I Thought I Knew You
