Social Suicide
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You don't know what you have until it's gone...
Social Suicide
my only friend is my brain and it's driving me insane left out here because i felt stuck out in the pooring rain i'll be myself stick to my plan outside your social klan regret these words no where to turn i'm alone i have no friends stop this war erase the score i once was your friend before everyone turned there back no longer friends anymore i don't know why i feel this way i need some friends to help but they're all gone i'm all alone all this sorrow to myself these words are said behind closed doors each side has drawn there line eveyone stands with you though no one here is right all by my lonesome i hate this empty feeling all by myself no one to help i'm coeping and i'm dealing please lets just end this now give a hand and help me out i was there when you were down and now i'm all gone we've met our end friends don't hate friends sincerely yours, please be well |
Submitted on 2004-04-23 14:52:15 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This ones hard to read. It just seems really long. I mean the imagery was great, but i was struggling(well maybe that was just my attention span. lol) I really don't know what to say about this one| | Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by roxygirl239 | [ Reply to This ] | Good flow... some grammar errors but that's the least I'd expect since poetry breaks most rules. | -everyone stands with you though no one here is right- Didnt understand this at first but then I knew what you were expressing. So many people though it just doesn't feel like they can do anything, i know that feeling tho i get it when im around everyone many times:/. Anyways, I don't know if you believe in God but it helps because, it happened to me once. I was all alone in a place with no1 I knew and I didn't want to talk to them because I just wanted to be with my "friends" that werent there.... so I tried to talk to Him and i felt like i realy was talking with Him and soothed my spirit and i got the force i needed to go on. I've never stopped believing and even though I'm all alone and no1 understands me even if I don't fake it, i don't care what others do, think or say because the Lords understand me. my pain and everything else. Cheer up ! Even if you can't take your "friend/s" of your mind and your life there is someone else that wants to be with you and that loves you! And best of all, you don't have to hide anything from Him. Hope the best for you, Depdem   X| Posted on 2004-04-23 00:00:00 | by Depdem | [ Reply to This ] | |
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