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    dots Submission Name: Questdots

    Author: dx10687
    ASL Info:    22 / M / IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 13/19/18
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 827
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 974

       Religious undertone.
    Comments on how it is and how to possibly expand it
    Also a title name because it is still untitled
    Titles I have thought of are "Quest" "Journey" "Looking" "Where Are You"
    I'm going to be learning keyboard soon and this is going to be my first song that i'm going to key up so that my youth group's worship band can play it.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    I'm looking for You
    It seems like you have left me
    But I know that You are there

    Sometimes life hands us problems
    Then we turn to You
    And sometimes
    You just don't seem to respond

    I'm calling out to You
    It seems like You have left me
    But I know that You are there

    We just need to remember
    That You are always there
    Even when it seems like You've gone
    We just need to believe

    I can see You in the distance
    I can almost see Your face
    I knew You were there

    This is our time to connect
    We just need to look for You
    And worship You
    With all of our heart

    I have found You
    You never left my side
    You wer always there

    All we ever need to do
    Is turn to You
    For You are always there
    Even when it seems like You have gone

    Submitted on 2005-11-22 08:15:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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