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    dots Submission Name: just dont get itdots
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    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       someone asked me once "if you had to do one thing for the rest of your life what would it be?" and i said i would search for the colors i cant see because science says there is a whole other spectrum we cant process in our minds but its there and i think if we tried we could invent a way to see it. they said that would be pointless but i said itd be better than inventing warfare and all the other bullshit we do. it would be enhacing the beauty of life.


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    living more and enjoying less
    you ask hows my day and i say i hope the best is yet to come
    and sometimes you smile and say
    youll never understand me
    but what do you need to understand
    all you have to do is ask a question
    so you ask what im committed to
    but dont laugh when i say the institution
    you want to know what im going to do
    with my life
    and ill tell you
    i want to spend my life trying to defy gravity
    trying to see the invisible colors beyond the spectrum
    that we know

    do you get me yet
    do you get me yet

    i want to walk on water
    or make it rain
    i dont think thats exactly what you wanted me to say

    do you get me yet
    im not quite as strange as you think

    im just a girl who doesnt want to waste away in reality
    i want to paint the portrait of the stranger who can tell me the meaning of life
    i want to step out of the boundaries
    and let you hear the music of my mind
    i want to hear the serene silence
    and i want to love you until i die

    do you get me yet
    do you get me yet

    thats still not what you want me to say is it
    and i think youre right
    maybe youll never understand




    Submitted on 2005-11-22 15:18:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful, absolutely beautiful...i love your answer to the questoin, and i love the poem you wrote because of it. I completly agree on every note. This entire poem is just bursting with emotion behind the surface, and the pictures forced into my mind while i was reading it was breathtaking...
    | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by Mercy December | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good. It made me think. I'm actually in the point of my life where i'm asking the question okay if there is a god...who made him? lol i know werid. But smart if you think about it. I look for the illogic. Like anyone can see clouds...but what do you see when you look at clouds...i see many things. lol anyways it was good it made me think about life...if only for a second.

    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]


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