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    dots Submission Name: Zenithdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 772
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       We climb many mountains - we shall climb many more...it's not how long the journey is or how many mountains and valleys we encounter along the way - "ITs" seeing the beauty in a challenge anew! Growth, Love, Persistance.

    I'm on day 5 of X cigs!

    Never give up and smile along the way....thankfully!

    Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE!!!
    tif
    Happy Thanksgiving!


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    Lo! Finally, the far away Mountain Peak
    in view
    at the zenith
    of attainment
    My soul will leap
    and fly over
    the unseen valley
    and guide me to
    a pinnacle
    anew
    a journey never ending......




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      Although this poem is short it speaks volumes...'My soul will leap
    and fly over
    the unseen valley
    and guide me to
    a pinnacle
    anew
    a journey never ending..." reads as hopeful prayer. Like this. `always write poetry, Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff, I loved the flow of Zenith. This is a beautiful free verse. I really enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing. My favorite lines were: My soul will leap
    and fly over
    the unseen valley
    | Posted on 2005-11-26 00:00:00 | by oixi | [ Reply to This ]
      this is living in a nutshell, climbing the mountains
    we face and leaping for the next challenge.. they
    are all blessings and lessons for us to learn.
    thanks for sharing your insights with us!

    love&peace,
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Tiff, you inspire me to accept the challenge, and that seems the main purpose of this write. Sometimes I want to be lazy and stand still, can't do that, life and love are calling.

    Who knows what's in store for those with a sense a adventure?

    Thanks for being Tiffanny, love too,

    Nan

    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a lovely prose with a wonderful message! YEAY! for you and no smoking! I quit them things myself a few months ago and even though it is hard, it is well worth it. I feel so much better now and no more coughing and that is the best part. Not to mention the small fortune not going up in smoke anymore! I am proud of you! The first couple of weeks are the hardest and then...smooth sailing...you wont miss it so much. The hardest part is getting over the psychological effect of the habit. Be strong girl! Wonderful write. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Life is a never ending journey of peaks and troughs - just like your mountain tops and valleys. As Julie Andrew's once said, and of course you - "climb every mountain"

    Sound advice - and a good poem.
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoy Zenith, even though I am not a big free verse fan. The flow of your poem was very good, which is a little harder to do when you aren't relying on a rhyme scheme. Good write, thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by oixi | [ Reply to This ]
      very nice indeed congrats on your smokes as you say in your discription
    your way with words is exceptional you alwaz post a great picture of thoughts
    thanx for previous comments
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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