Description: We climb many mountains - we shall climb many more...it's not how long the journey is or how many mountains and valleys we encounter along the way - "ITs" seeing the beauty in a challenge anew! Growth, Love, Persistance.
I'm on day 5 of X cigs!
Never give up and smile along the way....thankfully!
Although this poem is short it speaks volumes...'My soul will leap and fly over the unseen valley and guide me to a pinnacle anew – a journey never ending..." reads as hopeful prayer. Like this. `always write poetry, Cheryl.
This is a lovely prose with a wonderful message! YEAY! for you and no smoking! I quit them things myself a few months ago and even though it is hard, it is well worth it. I feel so much better now and no more coughing and that is the best part. Not to mention the small fortune not going up in smoke anymore! I am proud of you! The first couple of weeks are the hardest and then...smooth sailing...you wont miss it so much. The hardest part is getting over the psychological effect of the habit. Be strong girl! Wonderful write. Take care.
I really enjoy Zenith, even though I am not a big free verse fan. The flow of your poem was very good, which is a little harder to do when you aren't relying on a rhyme scheme. Good write, thanks for sharing.