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I told you not to go


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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hmmmmm idk i wrote this for....yea he hung up on me today so i'm pissed at him but i wrote this a while back.


I told you not to go



I'll close my eyes
and pretend you're not there
turn my back to you
so i don't see your cold stare

turn up the music
listen to the beat
ignore everything around me
'cause honey talk is cheap

I'll scream and yell
to get your attention
I'll cuss and call you names
yea that's my intention

just so you can turn around
just so you'll know
that when i was crying
I told you not to go....




Submitted on 2005-11-22 16:37:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ahhh. look at danni being all emotional. that sux. yeah i know we guys can be [censored]s sometimes and pretty emotionless. it's all a part of being manly. i like the way u try to ignore him then when you need him most he's gone. good write babe
| Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  hey! this is sad! ya bf's can piss me off sometimes! ya troys rite they can be [censored]s and emotionless! its a guy thing i dunno! guyz r weird!
~akaila evonne~
| Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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