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    dots Submission Name: all alone againdots
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    Author: _Dancing_Alone_
    ASL Info:    14/f/and...MARS.
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 91/96/36
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 270
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1433



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    dotsall alone againdots
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    i watch the rain outside my window.
    the sky is dark & filled with shadows
    im too bad 4 heaven & not good enough for hell.
    now my reality seems to be taking over.

    you'd think im so evil,but the truth is -im not.
    you'd think my mind is filled with horror,but the truth is-im lonely alot.

    ~-chorus-~
    all alone again-retracing my steps,making regrets
    all alone again-making new mistakes,faking new steps
    im all alone again,out in the cold & nobody's home.its all because-i feel im gone....

    my mind's mixed up on what i did wrong.
    & the rain outside is getting strong er.
    i push people away everyday & then i wonder what i had to say.the rewind button is,
    most wanted in my head.
    i guess god wants me to learn my lesson instead.
    & you'd think i'd learn from my heavy mistakes.
    you'd think i'd try hard to change myself
    & the truth is-i might never wake up from this nightmare!
    ~_~ Chorus ~_~
    my multiple personalities,to see who's win over me.
    i've told the truths, now i'll tell the lies--------
    sometimes im not happy with this life.
    __________________________
    my hunger feeds on my appetite..........
    _______________________________






    Submitted on 2005-11-22 17:46:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      you are a very good songwriter. who hasn't felt this way atleast once in their life?
    you should write more! you have a wonderful imagination.
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, this was a very beautiful song, I could almost picture the melody, something very Evanesence-like. I love that band, do you? Message me sometime, I feel like this a lot of my life, just letting you know that I do know where you're coming from from a certain point. Great lyrics, hope to see more.
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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