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    dots Submission Name: insanity nationdots
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    Author: _Dancing_Alone_
    ASL Info:    14/f/and...MARS.
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 91/96/36
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
    Total Views: 250
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 995



    Description:
       oh my gosh-i had so much fun on this one.
    me & my friend "got high" on sugar & i know it doesnt have that much thought or not really stable or just might sound silly but o well! deal w/ it...........


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    dotsinsanity nationdots
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    its pointless,its hopeless.were 99%-defenceless.
    its crazy & raining .we cant stop complaining.whenever we start on something fun-its like the whole end, has just begun.
    *-*Chorus*-*-------------
    SCREAM!SHOUT! tell evry one what its all about!nothing can stop us ,yet nothing can save us-life is so (special/awsome?) with you on the ride
    That special little ride to INSANITY NATION......

    & we know,people stare.we're safe in our warm white jackets-we dont give a care.
    @ least its exiting ,to just do something.
    & lets make a promise,that where ever we go--we'll make it a non-stop show.
    & lets make a pak that no matter who's watching us.....we're gonna ....
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    *-* Chorus*-*
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    we dont wanna be saved,
    we dont wanna be tamed,
    all we wanna do is-----
    TO SCARE THEM AWAY!




    Submitted on 2005-11-22 18:02:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very Clever
    I can see Blink 182 or a real hardcore punk band like Strung Out doing this
    Its comical so maybe leaning more to Blink 182 or Green Day
    I remember those days as a child being all rivaled up on sugar and then running around the house like there was no tommorow
    I actually miss those days a lot
    oh well
    As Blink 182 would say
    i GUESS THAT THIS IS GROWING UP
    Thanks for bringing back some good memories!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-09-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      i love your stuff. it reminds m of when i write lyrics when i wake up in the middle of the night after eating lots of candy. haha thats when im really spastic assuming im not permanently spastic..
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      I hope to see more things from you. I like how the title really fits. I can see you guys in a rollercoaster kind of if that makes any sense lol

    Much Love,
    ERIN
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by xmangaXfreakx | [ Reply to This ]
      Awesome, you write some good lyrics, I'll say that much, lol. This is definately my kind of music, I can just picture the beat going with this song...maybe a metal one? Yeah, a metal or grindcore kind of lyric this poem reminds me of...wow speaking backwards I am...must stop watching Star Wars, Yoda's contagious! lol joking, well, good write, hope to see more.
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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