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    dots Submission Name: Abstract Part 1dots

    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       My LA teacher wrote up unlikely combinations of abstract nouns and adjectives. I picked Unique Hunger, Hilarious Depression, and Monstrous Thoughts. We had to write free verse poems.

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    dotsAbstract Part 1dots


    I have a hunger,
    but not for food.
    I have a hunger for happy endings,
    dreams come true,

    I have a hunger for cutting open my head
    and letting my brain spill onto the pages like this.

    I have a hunger
    thats not like yours. Or yours.
    I have a hunger for a mind
    of my own.
    To be what others don't expect.

    I have a hunger
    to go back in time and take away all the bad things that I've done.

    And I have a hunger,
    to tell all of the people I love that I do.

    I also have a hunger,
    to change the world.

    I have a hunger. For Life.

    Submitted on 2005-11-22 18:51:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was interesting Having a hunger for life is a good thing! Are you going to post the others you picked also?

    Enjoy the day and Thanksgiving!
    Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE!
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Not bad, what kind of grade did you get for this? I liked how long did it take you to write? Well if you get a chance come read some of my stuff and tell me what you think ok?
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

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