I like this poem and the tongue- in- cheek humour ( not to mention the dreadful pun) "he is living a card bored life.'' ha Ha Ha I enjoyed this poem with its playful use of words, and I liked the concluding line, nicely laced with citric acid…and a wry smile
'as he plays teary solitaire with a cheater'' you write with a light touch and it is very good
this is really neat Chrystine. the side of the story no one talks about or considers before they make that big mistake. I think this is very original and creative and a great contribution to the challenge. nice write!
I think this write is very clever...well composed and with a lot of imagination. And, it tells truth about what happens to cheaters. It is short, sweet and to the point and I think I will add it to my favorites because it holds all these qualities. I enjoyed this read very much! !doc`