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    dots Submission Name: Chachy Anndots
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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 685
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1181



    Description:
       An ode to my cousin and my best friend who are one in the same!


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    dotsChachy Anndots
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    Chasity, my cousin so sweet
    Devilishly perfect from her head to her feet
    Her hair only seven different shades
    Beautifully blended for each days masquerade
    She wears what she likes and walks her own mile
    Does everything with her own unique style
    Puppy dog eyes of the deepest brown
    I hate to see them tear when she frowns
    A heart made of the purest gold
    A soul that can't be borrowed or sold
    Will power that could out do all
    In the end she'll never falter, never fall
    Although naughty and nice, she's clearly heaven bound
    She shows the love she has insidde without making a sound
    She's lived a life of heartache and sorrow
    But doesn't let it affect her tomorrow
    Has a quick temper and a very headstrong way
    I'm proud to get that from her any day
    Without someone like her, life wouldn't be complete
    Making it through would be an impossible feat
    My cousin, soulmate and friend
    I know she'll be here until the end
    And when to heaven our souls do send
    I know we will meet again




    Submitted on 2005-11-22 21:57:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      That was really nice. I love your rhymes, they're really good. Im sure she really liked it, I would cry too if someone close wrote a true thing like this about me.
    Thanks for reading mine about my sis. Your relationship to your cousin sounds just like me and my sis. I'm glad she is there for you. Friendships like these are the best. ya know.

    Meg
    | Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]
      awe this is sweet as can be! i have a cousin that i feel like this about.
    i'm sorry to know that she has had the bad times though. she seems like a wonderful young lady and i hope she reads this.
    wonderful poem , wonderful work!
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]


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