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    dots Submission Name: My Last Showdots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 254
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 187
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1600



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       it just came to meh^_^


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    dotsMy Last Showdots
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    Well I'll give you this
    I'm prone to mistakes
    And I'll give
    Everything it takes

    Just tell me you love me
    One more time
    You cant spell desperate
    Without a D

    There were a million times
    That youve said it before
    But id love to hear it
    Just once more

    Tell me you miss me
    Even though its a lie
    So I'll take this rope
    And give it a tie
    Around my throat
    I swear it will look so pretty
    Just for you

    Make me feel wanted
    Or I'll take this gun
    And even then you'll feel tempted
    To let out your last one

    One meaning your last joke
    On me but its too late now
    I've pulled the trigger
    Now its time for you to choke
    On your own words

    This will be the last line
    That you'll drop at my feet
    Tell me that you'll missm e
    Because i know you will

    My last words may not rhyme
    But thats ok
    Because you'll never care
    This is all your fault
    And i know you'll feel guilty

    When you come to tell me your last line
    Ya, you found me
    On my knees for the last time
    As you looked blankly at my face
    I pulled that trigger right before your eyes
    Maybe now you can see the pain
    That all came from you

    And just to let you know
    It was an honor
    To see you at my last show...





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