Description: This piece is about a love that was given up.
The issues of the world murdered the passion between the lovers. See if you can catch the metaphor. If not, comment and I'll go from there.
Flight of My Lover -------------------------------------------
As I lay in my sheets
of exhaustion;
a silence hits the air.
You're not there, where have you gone?
I comb through our void so
that I can desperately latch on
to a tree, as the flood waters
below me rage past.
Kind hearted one, can you hear me?
Wake up!
And I shook the lifeless
body that once was you.
ouch this poem seems like it hurt just to write it's so sad and emotional i liked the way you broke the poem up i often do the same thing myself...overall very good write siara
Submission Name: Flight of My Lover
