Description: my friends came over really fucked up and this kind of pushed me over the edge. they just acted like it was their craphole of a room. they are drunk order pizza act fucking stupid and just bail when they feel, i am done taking their shit
You're Not Wanted Here -------------------------------------------
You spit in my face and treat me like shit
I used to take it and not make a fit
But today a change is underway
Do not try to fuck with me today
My anger is only worsened by my pain
My darkness is clouded only in this pouring rain
I can't think straight, and the rage is strong
I turn from the light, it pains before long
You come over fucked up as usual
tearing up my house acting like you don't know
I want to calm down... but I can't
All I wanna do is sit here and rant
Stay away now you're not wanted here
I fear I may kill you and not shed a tear
Bleh. I've had some friends that I feel have just used me, so I know where you are coming from about that, for sure. This had a lot of emotion in it. You had a strong voice, but I'm sure that had a lot to do with the fact that you feel strongly about this. Great write... keep it up!
"My darkness is clouded only in this pouring rain"
"Stay away now you're not wanted here I fear I may kill you I fear I may not shed a tear"
are both very awesome lines, but I especially love the power of the second one, you make it end so perfectly. Yeah my anger songs are much like these, they always end up the same way, usually with a death. But, I think the reason for this (at least in my case) is because you know you would get in trouble if you really killed someone, and you can't get in trouble at all if you write it down on paper, so really poetry is my escape, the paper just lets me know that I can't physically do anything stupid. Do you feel the same way as I do? But yeah, I hate friends like that though, they always take advantage of you, and then leave your house, and leave a huge mess, and obviously no one's left to clean it up but you
yea i know how it feels to have friends like that you just have to stand up to them and tell them that if they're gonna disrespect you like that then you aren't gonna take their [censored] anymore...but yea just a suggestion siara