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    dots Submission Name: out of memorydots
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    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 736
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 663



    Description:
       hahahahahahahaha this is funny to me for special reasons.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsout of memorydots
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    click backspace
    more useless excuses about why i didnt call
    hit delete
    more regreted letters about how i feel
    how do i feel some may ask?
    with my heart and hands like everyone else
    duh
    one, two, three here goes
    do you miss me
    wait im too afraid of the answer
    ok never mind lets have it
    ready set stop dont go
    hit exclamation point twice
    maybe that will show i meant it
    or maybe i didnt
    but youll never have to know
    hit power
    im done with this
    call me if youre sorry
    dont if youre expecting my apology
    its in the recycle bin




    Submitted on 2005-11-23 22:19:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Oh is this good
    It was extremely creative
    It seems a lot of people are using the computer as a way to say im sorry or I Love You
    I hope they realize it will never match the emotion of hearing those words in person
    Again
    Great Write!
    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-11-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This is cleverly and smoothly done. This is a real metaphor for many of us typing as we do our poetry.

    I like the feel and flow. The points are clear.

    It grabs you with the first line and takes the reader on a fun ride.

    Very nice!
    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]
      This was again unique and very ammusing. I like the whole plot of it...deception and miscommunications...and labeling it serious adding to the humor. talking to people is something alot of people wouldn't write about but you captured it well...I agree with toyys the format could have been a bit better. other than that great write. keep writing
    peace
    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      creative and very amusing.i personally dont do the whole communicate or chat online.i dont care 4 half the people around me,much less metting someone online,

    the format could be improved but the creative process behind this=methophours and correlations=done nicely


    thanks 4 sharring


    toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]


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