goddamn! is it ok if i stalk you, because I love your poems...and your vocabulary is very wide, you know what you're saying and it is very clear, and again the lines in this poem, I can't really pick any out, but I will, because some of them really stand out to me, like:
"Through our dreams, I wandered on the dark side of the moon."
"But I sought and found what I needed. My flesh and I are not so far apart. I salted and pressured the wound that bleeded. I can finally rest deep in my heart."
Really the title is one of the best titles I have ever heard, it's so creative...and also the rhyme sceme is also creative, I don't know exactly what it's called, but I think it's ABAB CDED FGFG...right? that's so slick, well anyways, keep coming up with new poems, and I'll keep reading
wow. this was the best poem I've read on here today. outstanding job. i loved your metaphoric deliverence. it was so original for me, aren't we tired of seeing birds, bees, grass, trees. "as i walked through the garden of night" was so creative, and creativity is my favorite part of poetry.