Description: This piece is about that lover that constantly abuses and never thinks twice. But you always end up loyal to them no matter how they treat you. That's part of love
Love Abuse -------------------------------------------
You've shown me you loved me
by hurting me again.
I'll be your punching bag, I'll be your sin
You've shown me you loved me
by ripping me apart.
You've lost all reason, but hitting me's a good
start.
You've shown me you loved me
by apoligizing sincerely,
Though you hurt me always, I love you dearly.
I know too well what you mean. You said it perfectly though. I would make this comment better, but all of my comments sound the same and I'm getting sick of it. I've been stuck in "comment hell" (as someone once called it) for months now. Oh well. I didn't intend to comment at all, but I wanted you to know how much I love it. You have a lot of talent. Beautifully done
Will you ever stop, you are (and I'm being sincere) one of the best poets on here, you're entries are seriously worth reading, and yeah I'm "Mos-def" gonna stalk you, because I love your work...how old are you?
I have always liked the triplet rhyming. Nice job on that. "I love thee dearly" I didn't much like it. Because the use of the word "thee" to me is far too romantic for a poem about abuse. Anyways good write.
Submission Name: Love Abuse
