Dangerous Thing Called Love -------------------------------------------
Love is a feeling so spotless and pure
That it's the one feeling I've never had to endure.
Love is considered by many as a gain
But you can never get it without the pain.
There's so much hate in this wild world
That love's flag needs to be unfurled.
Matters of this complicated emotion
Is so great you feel engulfed by an ocean.
I never use this word any random way
I never use it to explain my feelings away.
This sweet poison I have never tasted
On me the words of love are wasted.
It is a dangerous thing to feel this way
To fall in love is to give your freedom away.
I think this is a great poem! It's really incredible and beautiful! It struck me so hard. I like how you were able to write about it so well. I mean, it's not easy to write about that topic. I like the flow... and I also like how you made every pair of lines rhyme at the ends.
"Love is considered by many as a gain But you can never get it without the pain."
^I totally agree with that part. I'm sure a lot of others would, too.
I think this is a lovely poem. It is a great point of view on the subject also. I have never seen it written from this point of view. I think it has a great flow from beginning to end. I like it thanks for the read.
INTERESTING POINT OF VEIW. AND WHATS EVEN MORE INTERESTING IS YOUR CLEAR AND BOLD ERESSION OF EMOTIONS YOU'VE NEVER FELT. Hmm... THIS POEM MAKES ME FEEL LIKE THE WRITER HAS KNOWN LOVE AND MAYBE HAS NOT REALIZED IT OR EXCEPTED IT. THE LINE "ON ME THE WORDS OF LOVE ARE WASTED" DESCRIBE THE LOVING WHO ARE UNLOVED. GREAT JOB