Always and foever.
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wrote this when i loved David i still do but...not so much.
Always and foever.
A million thoughts and words unsaid A million voices in my head A very climaxed sensation a goal reacihng it's destinations you me us together sweet tales of us forever very naive words that make me leave You'll leave me? never our world...always and forever |
Submitted on 2005-11-25 00:41:01 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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short and sweet. but big words and extravagant phrases couldn't have said it any better. in fact it woulda probly made it worse. this is a fave for me. cuz although it's simple, i can relate| | Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | I like the poem I have a few like it, next time double check spelling "reacihing"(I do that too) | And though pretty I don't know what you going for, A million thoughts, I seems that confusion, not resolve would be more of the priority at the end the sarcasm/irony is a bit muddled. overall I like it:) | Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by Aruemos | [ Reply to This ] | Short and sweet. I like them this was you get your point across and thats what its all about right. Thanks for the read. | | Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | |
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