WOW! I think this is probably the best I've read of yours so far, but I just started, that could change. This was really good! You have every right to be proud of it. This was my favortie part: "The strange is normal, the normal is free. The inanimate alive with no blood to bleed." -> Love it! Can't wait to read more!
oh its sooo hard to flyy and so easy to falll, ans those up highhh fall soo muchh harderrr. sorry to be a downer, but im not in the bestest of moods at the moment. nice poem even if i cant share the happy spirits.