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Many Moods


Author: lastdragon
ASL Info:    19/F/MO
Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 38 /43 /13
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Description:

If you can't tell after reading this...I love EYES!!!
I can stare into anybody's forever!!! (that includes mine!! lol) this is my description of their MANY moods!!!! hope you enjoy reading this!


Many Moods


Blazing Orbs
of Energetic Fire

Glowing Embers
of Searing pain

Razor-Sharp Discs
of Glaring Hatred

Shinning Steelies
of Raw Determination

Frozen Beads
of Primal Fear

Narrow Slits
of Animal Distrust

Dazzling Gems
of Pure Delight

Soft Pearls
of Eternal Love

Open Windows
to the Mortal Soul




Submitted on 2005-11-25 16:01:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hey. I love this poem, and yeah-Ive got to agree. Eyes are two of the BEST things in the world. Your poem shows how many different feelings we can get, just from looking into someones eyes. Its great! I love it!
| Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by nuttyginna | [ Reply to This ]
  Great job, shining is spelled wrong tho, lol. Also, i would suggest modifying your word choice for 'primal fear' and 'animal distrust', they dont flow like the others, maybe use the online thesaurus, its pretty good.

~Kane~
| Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by Kane Martyr | [ Reply to This ]
  hey my friend wrote a poem like this and it had a line in it that said eyes=windows to the soul=the reason i wear glasses. this is a good poem though i figure with eyes you could go on all night. you still havent used pools by the way and thats a nifty one when talking of eyes.
| Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by namesdontmatter | [ Reply to This ]
  This was a very cool write. I loved all this about eyes lol...have you checked out my "eye illusoin"...it's kinda similair. anyways this was great I loved your choice of descriptive words...I think-yes this is a favorite. thanks for sharing this with everyone. hope more people comment it's well worth the read.
Peace
| Posted on 2005-11-25 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]


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