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    dots Submission Name: Liar to Detestdots
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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 761
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 926



    Description:
       Heh...teen angst. It's all highly amusing, ain't it?


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    dotsLiar to Detestdots
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    I never wanted to be here.
    It wasn't my choice,
    I don't care.
    I'm such a teen,
    And I'm so depressed.
    I'm such a loser;
    A liar to detest.

    I'll slit my wrists
    In front of you
    To get you to notice
    What I want you to,
    Then you'll see
    My precious trick:
    There is no blood,
    It was just to make you tick.
    Did it work?
    Do you care?
    Does it matter
    That no cuts are there?
    I'm just a teen,
    And I'm so depressed.
    I'm such a loser,
    A liar to detest.

    Why do you hate me
    When I just want to love?
    WHY DO YOU STARE
    I'M JUST SCREAMING MY BRAINS OFF!!!
    I can't help it;
    I am a teen,
    And I'm so depressed.
    I'm such a loser,
    A liar to detest.




    Submitted on 2004-01-15 20:04:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lol...every time I read this I giggle to myself...
    | Posted on 2004-01-16 00:00:00 | by JKPS613 | [ Reply to This ]
      heheh. This made me smile. Keep on tricking and treating...
    | Posted on 2004-01-16 00:00:00 | by hopefloats | [ Reply to This ]
      great job sweety. i think it makes perfect sense. perhaps a little steriotypical. but then i guess you already knew that.
    | Posted on 2004-01-16 00:00:00 | by anarchyrainsupreme | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA..that's soo great...man I needed that...well done, and it's so true...i guess thats what makes it funny
    | Posted on 2004-01-15 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]



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