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    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       even now im still blaming myself. courts would love me its too easy to get me to plead guilty


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    miss me miss me
    so easy to miss but not so easy to forgive
    i guess giving has never been youre strong suit
    not like hearts
    as in cards
    i guess i should stop cracking jokes
    you never seem to get them

    kiss me kiss me
    so easy to kiss but not so easy to forget
    i guess youll never put this away
    like you have every other mistake

    love me love me
    harder to not love than to forgive and forget
    and that was always my best bet
    i guess in the end you folded
    it was always a bluff, and now i know it
    but it hurt so much that i wont make that mistake again






    Submitted on 2005-11-25 20:23:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmmmm...dont; like this much nearly as much as your others. I am however drawn to you dark frame of mind, and the miss me miss me, kiss me kiss me thing, though at first the pattern kind of anoid me, it kind of works. You jsut seem to make everything a little original, no matter what the subject.
    | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by Mercy December | [ Reply to This ]


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