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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Skydots
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    Author: _Dancing_Alone_
    ASL Info:    14/f/and...MARS.
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 91/96/36
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 455



    Description:
       i wrote this while in the car,near midnight,coming back from a thanksgiving party.
    weird,i never thought i'd write this while i was like half-dead.....or real tired anyway.
    so once again,just tell me what you think about this.


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    dotsMidnight Skydots
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    airplanes flying in the sky,
    only one star in the night.
    no clouds,up in the air,
    feel the wind fly through my hair.

    cool breeze rushes on my face,
    all my thoughts just feel erased.
    Can you see?!
    Can you tell?!
    in the midnight sky,How do you feel?

    Do you feel unleashed?
    do you feel free?
    Can you see the cold?
    Can you hear the story that i've told?




    Submitted on 2005-11-26 15:50:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this poem was very, very good. I liked it and it was an interesting subject, which made it an awesome read. A lot of questions that to be honest I can't really answer, lol. Well, you're a great writer, so keep up the great work. I want to see more from you!
    | Posted on 2005-11-26 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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