Mirror Mirror what do you hide
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What do you think
Mirror Mirror what do you hide
Mirror mirror you do not lie you show only what is there As I look into my face I see what others see a tired and shabby me my hair is frazzled my face is pale my makeups smeared I look so frail There i stand a average girl living in this hateful world wondering why i’m here what people see of me is what they judge without a second chance to take the time to look into my eyes just one single glance would show my heart and soul lurking beneath my mask burried deap inside me and all the secrets i may hide all this can be seen in just a single glance just a glance into my eyes look and you may be suprised |
Submitted on 2005-11-26 21:14:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Good poem. I liked it, and I agree with you, no one bothers to look at what's on the inside. It's always about the outside. I can relate. It's hard for me to make friends because of how I look to others. They see me as a dark, mean, and weird person, when actually I'm just the opposite. I hate that! Anwyays, great work, and the only spelling mistake I found was in the fourth stanza, first line. Where you said "there I stand a average girl" I'm not quite sure but I think your suppose to use 'an' rather than 'a'. Although, I really shouldn't be saying anything. I make spelling mistakes in just about every poem I write. ~Piper | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ] | this was wierd. i liked it though. sometimes it's hard to see ourselves as we truly are and it can be a wake up call to see ourselves as others do. this was very good and i hope to read more | | Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | Awesome write. I loved it. It realtes to the poem "looking in the mirrior" that I wrote. I can relate to it very much. People always look on the outside, not whats on the inside :) keep it up | | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by TwinkleToes | [ Reply to This ] | nice write...I liked the overall concept because it was easy to relate to...often times someone looks in the mirror and wishes it were deception but it's those who really believe it is that have a problem...but beauty comes in many forms and from your poetry I'm fairly sure ur a beautiful person |  . this was a good write and I enjoyed the read. peace | Posted on 2005-11-27 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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