Description: im so angry and i dont know if i should be or what and i just want to cry and its so stupid because other people have real problems and im whining over a stupid guy.
dont call i wont call -------------------------------------------
it hurts
youre different now
its different now
and i think to myself howd it get this way
i could handle it if id done something
i could handle it if you hated me
i cant stand the confusion
the not knowing
if youre avoiding me
or you just cant get to the phone right now
im afraid now
i feel like im fading out
the hope i had is slowly dying away
i could handle it if id done something
i cant handle to not knowing
if youre just ignoring me
or maybe you are just waiting for me to leave a message
i wont
i wont call anymore
you know my number
i wont let myself believe this is just a mistake
because it was easy to hope after the first few calls
but im batting a thousand
and ive still got the phone in my hand
I don't think your stupid, or that is stupid, some peopel can take it to a stupid level, but that's only some peopel. I like this because it kind of reminds me of my ex, and though this definately isn't one of your better pieces, it is still well written, and i stil like it. There are a couple of word problems you could fix like:
i cant handle to not knowing
I do like the ending, just a bang ending. Good write all around.
Submission Name: dont call i wont call
